Minor: changes to sun and windows metaphor
Sun metaphor:
The sun starts off bright and happy with rays of sun around it. The rays spin around the sun all joining together at the top to make an exclamation mark. The exclamation mark then disappears, and the sun dims. The sun's face turns sad and the sun turns to face downwards.
Windows metaphor:
The house is now by itself, it's not on a hill and doesn't have a tree or fence. The camera pans into the house, the top window slams shut and the bottom windows swing open. The whole front of the house then opens like a doll's house. You see Emily upstairs in a bedroom reading a book and you see Adam downstairs in a bedroom with some friends.
Webs metaphor:
I also made one last change to the webs metaphor by making the lines of web between the objects straight so that they are under tension like the objects are trying to move away from each other
The sun starts off bright and happy with rays of sun around it. The rays spin around the sun all joining together at the top to make an exclamation mark. The exclamation mark then disappears, and the sun dims. The sun's face turns sad and the sun turns to face downwards.
Concept Art:
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Changed storyboard:
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The house is now by itself, it's not on a hill and doesn't have a tree or fence. The camera pans into the house, the top window slams shut and the bottom windows swing open. The whole front of the house then opens like a doll's house. You see Emily upstairs in a bedroom reading a book and you see Adam downstairs in a bedroom with some friends.
Concept Art:
Friends designs:
Wardrobe, bed, lamp and ceiling light orthographs:
Changed storyboard:
I also made one last change to the webs metaphor by making the lines of web between the objects straight so that they are under tension like the objects are trying to move away from each other
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