Premise: Voiceover- two versions

Here is the first version of my voiceover, which is just me talking


Here is the second version of my voiceover, which is both me and my brother talking


Any feedback on which one is best would be great!

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  1. hi emily, I listened to both, speaking technically, the recordings sound a little bit tinny, and there is a slight bit of noise in the background. have you run it though audition yet to reduce the noise? also I personally think the two people works well for narrating but It sounds like it should be more of a conversation rather than each other finishing each others sentences. I think either work to be honest but possibly 20% more emotion in the voice would make it sound less like you're reading from a script. Thats just my opinion though.

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