Premise: Updated script- two opinions

This is my original developed script for my animation, the idea is that I am going to be saying each of these statements in a voiceover as the metaphor is shown on screen


But then I thought that it might be more interesting and engaging for the audience if my brother were to say the parts of the statements that are about him in the voiceover. So I have altered the script so that we both are speaking in the voiceover:



I think I will record both versions of the voiceover, the one with just me speaking and the one including both of us and then go from there and get opinions on which one I should use.